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Story writing Year 4 and 5

Year 5 have been learning how to write suspense stories. Here are the finished articles. See if you can spot the short sentences to create tension, the spooking descriptions and the words used to create a mysterious atmosphere. Enjoy!

Year 5- Suspense stories

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Year 4 Story writing

We have been reading this story in class and decided to change the end of the story to our own version. Look at our photos to see how we started this.

The children were given a map of Middleton Park. They had to use this to find where Jub and the witch lived. They also looked for where the witch had her fire.

We acted out the end of the story in the wildlife garden.

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When we had finished our writing we typed them up.

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